My Angel system

'You created a faction, but how?' Lena was in disbelief of what was happening.

'A faction?" Luis said.

'Angels have what they called it's like different families of Angels.' Lena explained.

'I've heard that from Michael before, could you please explain more?' Luis said.

'The Angels have different factions and each faction has its own leaders.' Lena said. 'If what this system is saying is true then you may have just created an eleventh faction and that is no way good.'

Luis wanted to reply to Lena when Michael suddenly tapped him on his shoulder.

"I've been standing here for quite a while watching you do nothing," Michael said. "When are you going to start doing what I told you?"

"I remember you asking me about which Angel faction I came from," Luis said.

"Yes, but what does that have to do with what we're doing?" Michael asked.

"Could you please tell me about the factions?" Luis asked, ignoring the question.

Michael stared at him for a while without speaking, this was one of the moments when Luis wanted to know what he was thinking but as always his mind read wouldn't work on him.

'All of a sudden he wants to know about the Angel factions.' Michael thought.

"The Angel factions were Angel families with the first ten Angels as their leaders.". Michael began his explanation. "These ten Angels were the first Angels to come into existence, they were created out of pure energy, and with that energy, they were able to create other Angels who could never surpass them, no matter what."

"Which faction is Zillah from?" Luis asked.

"I don't know," Michael said, shaking his head. "I've told you what you wanted to know, now will you start doing what I told you?"

"Ok," Luis said as he turned back to the Demi-Angels.

The idea Michael had given him was to give the Demi-Angels command that would bind them to keep their mouths shut about everything that had happened today and to avoid anything that would involve using their abilities until Luis found a way to return their abilities, that is if there is a way to return their abilities.

Luis wanted to give them the commands but before that, he wanted to do something else that he found very necessary.

"I know you are wondering who I am and what I have done to you." Luis began his speech. "My name is Luis Miles, I wasn't always like this, I opened my eyes one day and found myself in this world with these strange powers.

"Later on I discovered that I had become an Angel, one of the divine beings, it was hard to believe but I soon came to accept the new version of myself because well the whole thing was a part of me now.

"All my life I've been treated badly and I never thought I would be able to acquire such powers. What you are now is something called a Demi-Angel, a lesser version of an Angel which I also had to pass through.

"Bear in mind that you are no longer human and will start experiencing strange things in your body. A good example is as a Demi-Angel you will hardly get hungry although you can eat if you want.

"Becoming a Demi-Angel may have somehow taken away your abilities but I think you can still get them back.

"Lastly, I think I am here for a reason, to stop Lucifer and his demons and with both of you now Demi-Angels under me you will have to help me with that."

Clap! Clap! Clap!

Luis turned back to see Michael with both of his hands joined together.

"Nice speech but you still haven't given the commands," Michael said.

"I was getting to that," Luis said as he turned back to the Demi-Angels.

"First command."

[ Faction command/rule list ]

[ Please state your first rule ]

Luis was surprised by what he was seeing now, his system had everything planned out, it had a command section just like with his wolves.

'I wonder if this has a duration like the one with the wolves.'

[ Angels under your faction are bound to rules made by you as their leader ]

The system didn't state anything about duration but it also didn't say they were bound to the rules forever.

'I'll just give the commands and if any other thing happens I'll just have to deal with it.

"First rule, you are not to speak to anyone about what you are and what I am."

[ Error ]

[ Two subjects cannot be placed in one rule ]

Luis immediately understood what the system meant and knew where his mistake came from.

"First rule, you are not to speak to anyone about what you are."

[ First rule added ]

[ 1/10 rules ]

'So I can only make ten rules.'

'Then you should make the important rules first.' Lena said.

"Second rule, you are not to speak to anyone about me and what I am."

[ Second rule added ]

[ 2/10 rules ]

"Third rule, You must avoid anything that will put you in the position that will make people ask you to use your abilities."

[ Third rule added ]

[ 3/10 rules ]

"Fourth rule, you are to separate yourself from Carl's group."

[ Fourth rule added ]

[ 4/10 rules ]

"Fifth rule, you shall bow to me whenever in my presence."

[ Fifth rule added ]

[ 5/10 rules ]

"Huh," Michael said.

'I don't think that's a good idea.' Lena said.

Just like the fifth rule said the two Demi-Angels immediately went down on their knees and bowed to him.

"Calm down." Luis turned to Michael to say. "I was just checking something."

"Cancel the fifth rule." He turned back to the Demi-Angels and said.

[ Fifth rule canceled]

"For a second there, I thought you were starting to become something else," Michael said.

"Fifth rule, everything that happened today is to be kept a secret."

[ Fifth rule added ]

[ 5/10 rules ]

"Sixth rule, do not let the knowledge of what you are affect how you live your normal life."

[ Sixth rule added ]

[ 6/10 rules ]

"Seventh rule, you shall never attack me for any reason."

[ Seventh rule added ]

[ 7/10 rules ]

"Eighth rule, you shall never attack any of my friends."

[ Eighth rule added ]

[ 8/10 rules ]

"Ninth rule, there will be no insults when speaking to me."

[ Ninth rule added ]

[ 9/10 rules ]

That was the last rule Luis had in mind as he had covered all the areas he wanted to cover.

"I think that's all of them," Luis said after turning to Michael.

"Then they should be going back to their dormitories," Michael said as he quickly rolled two metallic balls towards them.

They were immediately covered with white light and when the light was gone they were no longer there.

______ ______

The sun shone as bright as ever on the Angels' planet but the atmosphere wasn't bright on the planet as all the leaders of the various Angel factions were all seated inside the large dorm around their meeting table.

They were supposed to be discussing whatever the agenda for the day was but they weren't as their eyes were fixed on a particular sport close to the table.

It was a white, shining crystal that had burst through the ground.

"An eleventh crystal but this can't be." The Angel at the other end said.

"This is indeed very strange." A female said.

"I am sending a message to Nova to start an investigation on earth while we do our own investigation here." The Angel said.

"How can this be possible?" The Angel at the other end said as he looked down at the crystal which was beside his seat.

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Heading back to school today to finish my exams, it's almost over and then I can take things seriously.

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